I stand alone in a dark subway as trains race by, brushing the hair out of my face with the force of a strong blow.A light appears from the top of the stairs, beckoning me outside. I follow the light, and find it's snowing, covering the world in a shining white. A faceless man stands across the street, waiting for the opportunity to walk closer. I feel a longing for this unknown man, and I need him but at the same time, I do not want him. I want him to come towards me, but not too close. Oh, hell with it, I let him grab my arm, and suddenly we are alone in a clouded field, dancing slowly. Blankets of silk and the stuff of imaginary clouds encircle us, and I feel safe here. I feel perfect. Home is here. I can walk to the window, and the cushioned seat that juts out the slightest but cradles my figure as I lie down watching the sun set behind the cherry blossom tree in the back yard. As I turn around, I see the candles that this faceless lover has strewn about the room, giving a dusty glow to enhance the reds and pale whites that create our small home. Let me sleep here, I whisper to him, and he embraces me as I fall away from my dream land and back to reality.
This entire endeavor is part of an experiment I am kind of conducting on myself in attempts to improve my writing. I just sit down, put my music on shuffle and write what comes to mind immediately, I write what I see. You should try it, it's great fun, and it's interesting to see what comes up.
Feel free to psychoanalyze. I totally would.
And since you have been so patient with me, here is some EYE CANDY!!!!!!
Creds to PerezHilton. I stole this from his site, so therefore, he can't sue me... Right? Right? God Kellan Lutz is delish
~Forever Yours

I lurve where you're going with this piece. Your descriptions are clear, but don't direct the reader too much at points where it doesn't need to. Kudos. It makes me urge for more though. Why are you afraid of him? What does he know? Why don't you want it? What are you trying to say here? It's a really fun technique, and even more fun to take it to even bigger places and fulfill the why? why write this? question. <3
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